Monday, December 24, 2012

Adventures in Beta Reading: 2


Shannon T. returned his draft.  More typos Roxanne missed and a few good questions that I need to sort out.  I'm not quite sure how to solve one.  Once I mentioned it to Roxanne, she said it made her wonder, too, but not enough to mark it.  I think I'll wait to hear back from the others first.

Aunt Dale apparently doesn't understand anything that's going on in The Legacy.  There are several possible reasons: she dropped out of high school, doesn't typically read fiction, and has no interest in this type of story.  She didn't tell me though.  She talked to my MawMaw, who talked to my Mom, who told me what's going on.  I don't mind the chain of discussion.  Better that I know something rather than nothing.  I haven't called her, yet, and I really need to.  At the very least, I can get that copy back.

I confess being a little worried about Jeremy.  He was on the phone with his wife and she asked if she could be a co-writer because she has lots of ideas on how to improve The Legacy.  I said, "No."  I worked too hard on this manuscript for so many years to bring in a co-writer.  I have no problem with co-writing something me and the other person conceptualized together or if another writer asks me to join what they've begun and I like the project.  For some reason, I doubt I'm getting that manuscript back at all.

Dolus work is going well enough.  The first section is getting a heavy reedit.  I think I'm removing more work than I'm adding, but in the end I know it'll make a better story.  That's all that matters.

Friday, December 21, 2012

The End Of The World


I had a real good laugh today from the Mayan Calendar controversy.  Either the world ends, aliens return to assist us, or we will all become enlightened.  Most Mayans themselves, however, just see an old calendar focusing on planetary alignment restart at day one.

"They'll either be blow up or a bliss out."  --Prof. Tony (didn't catch his last name), NPR/Fresh Air interview

I don't remember the context, so I encourage you to find and listen to it on your own, but I do remember its awesomeness.

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Adventures in Beta Reading


Got back one Beta copy of The Legacy.  Most of the comments are typos and such.  The coworker, Roxanne L., gave me an overall good review.  I found a few sentences she marked for other problems were actually caused by what the super helpful editor called "awkward syntax" in his suggestions.  I put in the changes, reprinted, and gave the result to another coworker, Shannon T.  They promised honesty.  I just hope they deliver.

I also gave a copy to my Aunt Dale and one to a guy named Jeremy who works at Books.  Jeremy promised he would be extra brutal in his comments.  I hope this is the case.